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Пример:

A Christmas Carol in Prose or Being a Ghost Story of Christmas, Charles Dickens

A churchyard (Nominative Sentences). Here, then; the wretched man (Affective/Emotive Epithet) whose name he had now to learn, lay underneath the ground (Euphemism). It was a worthy place (Affective/Emotive Epithet). Walled in by houses; overrun by grass and weeds, the growth of vegetation’s death, not life (Figurative/Transferred Epithet, Antithesis); choked up with too much burying (Metaphor); fat with repleted appetite (Figurative/Transferred Epithet) (Parallel construction). A worthy place! (Framing)

The Spirit stood among the graves (Personification), and pointed down to One (Capitalizing). He advanced towards it trembling. The Phantom was exactly as it had been, but he dreaded that he saw new meaning in its solemn shape (Affective/Emotive Epithet).

“Before I draw nearer to that stone to which you point,” said Scrooge, “answer me one question. Are these the shadows of the things that Will be (Capitalizing), or are they shadows of things that May be (Capitalizing), only?” (Epiphora).

Still the Ghost pointed downward to the grave by which it stood.

“Men’s courses will foreshadow certain ends, to which, if persevered in, they must lead,” said Scrooge. “But if the courses be departed from, the ends will change. Say it is thus with what you show me!”

The Spirit was immovable as ever.

Scrooge crept towards it, trembling as he went; and following the finger, read upon the stone of the neglected grave (Associated Epithet) his own name (Partial Inversion), EBENEZER SCROOGE (Detachment, Capitalizing).

“Am I that man who lay upon the bed?” (Italics) he cried, upon his knees.

The finger pointed from the grave to him, and back again.

“No, Spirit! Oh no, no!” (Exclamations, Interjection, Simple Repetition)

The finger still was there (Metonymy).

Lexical SDs

Syntactical SDs

Graphical SDs

Exclamations, interjections

For a stylistic analysis, an extract was chosen from the novella “A Christmas Carol” by Charles Dickens. This work explores themes of spiritual transformation, family and home, poverty in British society and social responsibility.

The chosen extract describes the final meeting of the story’s main character, Ebenezer Scrooge, with the last Spirit of Christmas, a spirit representing the future. The author’s style and the atmosphere he creates bring the reader closer to the character’s inner state of horror, despair and insight. The text can be divided into two parts. In the first part, Ch. Dickens describes a churchyard. In the second part, the author describes the dialogue between Ebenezer Scrooge and the Spirit of the Future, as well as Scrooge’s moment of insight.

The first part begins with a nominative sentence: “A churchyard”. This immediately transports the reader to the epicentre of humanity’s greatest fear – the fear of death. The sentence coldly and confidently presents the fact of death, which the main character has reached.

The next sentence is filled with several stylistic devices from different levels, describing the churchyard. The semicolon in this sentence structurally organizes the description, which is built through extended parallelism from homogeneous adverbial modifiers, expressed by participial phrases: “Walled in by houses; overrun by grass and weeds; choked up with too much burying…” These syntactically parallel constructions intensify the feeling of the overwhelming squalor of this place.

The description of the churchyard is also filled with emotional-evaluative epithets that convey not objective properties but the author’s attitude. “Wretched man” suggests the reader should view Scrooge with pity and compassion. The epithet “a worthy place” has a tone of irony and sounds like bitter sarcasm, emphasizing the monstrous unsuitability of this place for eternal rest. The phrase “man..., lay underneath the ground” is used instead of the direct “buried person”, indicating the presence of a euphemism. This lexical device is employed to soften the harsh reality of a cemetery.

This grim irony is maintained through other lexical devices – figurative epithets and antithesis. Ch. Dickens calls the weeds “the growth of vegetation’s death, not life”. This is not only a metaphor personifying death but also a classical antithesis, contrasting the processes of decay and life force. Further, the metaphor continues in the images “choked up with too much burying” and “fat with repleted appetite”, where the earth is compared to a disgusting creature consuming the dead. Here, a syntactic device also appears: Framing – the repetition of the exclamation phrase “A worthy place!” before the sentence with the description and immediately after it – encloses this description in a sarcastic circle, reinforcing the main idea.

Finally, the reader’s gaze is directed to the climactic dialogue of the entire work between Scrooge and the Spirit, where stylistic and graphical means come to the fore. Scrooge’s question is built on epiphora – the repetition of the phrase “shadows of things that...” at the end of syntactic periods. This rhythmic repetition, bringing prose closer to poetry, emphasizes the depth of his despair. However, the main stylistic graphical device here is the capitalization of the verbs “Will be” and “May be”. Ch. Dickens elevates them to the rank of abstract concepts, like laws of the universe. “Will Be” personifies inevitable doom and fate, while “May Be” – potential future and choice. Thus, Scrooge’s question turns into a philosophical debate about predestination and free will. The same applies to the sentence: “The Spirit… pointed down to One”, where one grave, Scrooge’s grave, is emphasized.

The most important and vividly expressed moment in this extract is the scene of reaching the grave. Partial inversion in the sentence “…read upon the stone of the neglected grave his own name” places the direct object “his own name” at the very end. Thus, during reading and perception, a syntactic delay occurs at this moment, creating powerful suspense: the action, the place, its characteristic are seen sequentially, and only then – the terrifying resolution. The final chord is the syntactic device of detachment: the name “EBENEZER SCROOGE” is isolated into a separate, graphically highlighted line, which serves its emphatic enhancement.

Scrooge’s reaction is conveyed through such expressive means as exclamation (“No, Spirit! Oh no, no!”), interjection (“Oh”) and through a syntactic device – simple repetition (“no, no”). This creates fragmented, broken speech, which is a verbal equivalent of the panic and psychological breakdown of a man on the verge. The italics in the character’s question “Am I that man...?” visually highlight the key pronoun, conveying Scrooge’s horror and disbelief.

As for the Spirit, spirits are commonly considered non-living and abstract, just like electricity or light quanta, therefore all the Spirit can be considered an example of such a lexical device as personification. A repeating symbol throughout the scene is also metonymy: “The finger”. The Spirit’s finger becomes a visible embodiment of its will, its silent verdict and ruthless pointing to the truth. Its stability is emphasized by simple repetition (“The finger still was there”), which creates an effect of intensification and brings the tension to its limit. Despite the gloom and anxiety of the extract, the figure of death, the Spirit of the Future, acquires a new meaning through the affective epithet for Scrooge (“…new meaning in its solemn shape”). Now death is not something terrible and evil; now it possesses grandeur and serious significance. This is evidence of the final turning point in the transformation of the main character.

The conducted analysis demonstrates the key features of the language of belles-lettres using the example of Ch. Dickens’s text. The author’s style is manifested in a unique combination of diverse stylistic devices and expressive means, which are subordinated only to his creative intention. This entire complex of devices works towards one aim – to create a powerful emotional resonance and to show the moment of the character’s profound spiritual crisis.

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Then when he was taking off his tie, he asked me if I'd written his goddam composition for him. I told him it was over on his goddam bed. He walked over and read it while he was unbuttoning his shirt. He stood there, reading it, and sort of stroking his bare chest and stomach, with this very stupid expression on his face. He was always stroking his stomach or his chest. He was mad about himself. All of a sudden, he said, "For Chrissake, Holden. This is about a goddam baseball glove." "So what?" I said. Cold as hell. "Wuddaya mean so what? I told ya it had to be about a goddam room or a house or something." "You said it had to be descriptive. What the hell's the difference if it's about a baseball glove?" "God damn it." He was sore as hell. He was really furious. "You always do everything backasswards." He looked at me. "No wonder you're flunking the hell out of here," he said. "You don't do one damn thing the way you're supposed to. I mean it. Not one damn thing."